Piece#3 draft: ESS(Extremely Short Story): change of a girl's feeling

There is a girl, no, there "WAS" the girl. She must have been there, but lost. Suddenly, lost real herself due to the earthquake(←strong shot?strong wave?strong motion?...). She was a typical middle class person, but now she cannot live without any help from other people. In fact, all people depend on the others, but she feel stigmatized because she's now poor and cannot think by herself. She want to be autonomy, but atmosphere not only of Tohoku but also of Japan doesn't allow.
(80words)

memo
スティグマ　　経済社会的不平等　従属　自身に嫌悪　

This is revised version after Hisashi looked at my piece#3 1st draft.
2nd draft
There was the "man". He must have been there. Suddenly, lost real himself due to the aids after the earthquake. He was a typical middle class person, but the atmosphere of Japan changed him badly. He wants to be autonomy, but he cannot. He feel stigmatized.
(47 words)

memo
now poor and cannot think by herself.
Who is he? He is myself(me).  ←all fiction!!


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